The purpose of the write up is to document the progression of digital literacy as well as the application of different literacies of one person. I think that my draft is currently achieving that because it walks through the interviewee’s experiences and how I gathered information.
I would like feedback on if I should include more quotes because I just roughly explained what was spoken about. I also want feedback on whether or not I should include more background information that I had before the interview so that it is more clear on how I gained that information and what exactly the information was. I would also like feedback on whether or not I should include more information about the interviewee.