Vernacular English, Code-Meshing, Code-Switching, & Writing Conventions

     by Audrey Schroeder

In a nation as culturally and linguistically diverse as the United States, it should not be surprising that there are many different vernacular languages spoken here. In recent years, there has been much debate on the teaching of Standard American English in schools. This begs the question: should only teaching or accepting Standard American English in schools as a useful and valid language be the norm? Code-meshing and code-switching are forms of using more than one variety of a language that have developed out of this dilemma and have become prominent in the United States. Code-meshing is taking more than one language or vernacular and combining the languages. Some examples of code-meshing are speaking in English but switching to Spanish for some words or phrases or using both Standard American English and African American Vernacular English to better articulate oneself. Code-switching is when one uses one language or vernacular in some scenarios and switches completely to another language or vernacular in other scenarios. According to the needs of American children and students growing up in a linguistically diverse nation, schools should improve the teaching of issues surrounding varieties of English as opposed to “standard” grammar and diction.

     Different academics and writers have differing opinions on the issue. For instance, Stanley Fish in his opinion piece “What Should Colleges Teach” for the New York Times, discusses what college professors should be teaching in regards to writing. Fish says he uses a method of “asking students to make a sentence out of a random list of words, and then explain what they did” then “asking students to turn a three-word sentence like “Jane likes cake” into a 100- word sentence without losing control of the basic structure and then explain, word-by-word, clause-by-clause, what they did” and finally “asking students to replace the nonsense words in the first stanza of Lewis Carroll’s “Jabberwocky” with ordinary English words in a way that makes coherent (if silly) sense, and then explain what they did, and how they knew what kind of word to put into each “slot.”’ (96-102). His approach to the issue appears to be to teach students “correct” Standard American English grammar and writing skills and encourage students to use different dialects and vernaculars to enhance style when appropriate. He cites inequality in an imperfect world as his reason for this. Fish explains that even if academically it is understood that different vernaculars and dialects are equally as acceptable, in the current state of this nation, all vernacular dialects are not accepted by certain occupations or industries and he does not want to give students false hope or skills that will not always be useful to them.

     Vershawn Ashanti Young is another academic who responded to Fish’s writing in his “Should Writers Use They Own English”. Fish has the opinion that prejudices against ways of speaking that are not “standard” are often racially motivated. He writes, “But dont nobody’s language, dialect, or style make them “vulnerable to prejudice.” It’sATTITUDES. It be the way folks with some power perceive other people’s language. Like the way some view, say, black English when used in school or at work. Black English dont make it own-self oppressed. It be negative views about other people usin they own language” (Young 110). Young’s point is that if the nation continues to teach young students that the way they have learned to speak and write is incorrect when it is dependent on their socioeconomic or racial or ethnic status, the prejudices will only worsen. He takes the stance that there is great value in the differences of vernaculars and people should not have to learn to code-switch or even code-mesh. He believes that different forms of vernacular English should be accepted. He even writes in a combination of code-meshing and code-switching between African American Vernacular English and Standard American English to further his point. For English speakers who do not use African American Vernacular English, it is still easily understood, the only thing that would hinder an English speaker from understanding the meaning of his writing would be prejudice or ignorance. 

     Jamila Lyiscott is a poet and educator who gave a TED Talk titled “3 Ways to Speak English” about code-meshing, code-switching, and the different forms of vernacular English she speaks. She “decides to treat all her languages as equal because [she] is articulate” (Lyiscott). She performs the entire TED Talk in a form of code-meshing and code-switching alternating between the different vernacular languages she speaks. She, like Young, firmly believes the current way vernacular English speakers are treated is rooted in racism and prejudice. She even goes as far as claiming that the entire reason many people in America speak different vernaculars is because they were “stolen or raped away from their homes” and that is why she speaks a “composite version of your language” (Lyiscott). Here, she is obviously referring to the enslavement of African and Indigenous people in America and how they were forced to learn a new language and how a middle ground of different vernaculars was formed in the process. An example of this locally, could be the Gullah language spoken primarily in Charleston. Gullah is a vernacular spoken primarily in Charleston but also in similar regions. It was created by African people, who were enslaved and brought to the United States through the port city of Charleston. This vernacular is now historic and is valued, but would most likely not be applauded in academic or work circles, aside from possibly an academic group interested in history.

     The Harvard Business Review published an article titled “The Costs of Code-Switching” discussing the positive and negative results of Black people in America utilizing code-switching in different environments and contexts. They explain that there are three major reasons that Black people use the strategy of code-switching in the workplace, “downplaying membership in a stigmatized racial group helps increase perceptions of professionalism”, “Avoiding negative stereotypes associated with black racial identity”, and “Expressing shared interests with members of dominant groups promotes similarity with powerful organizational members” (McCluney et al.). According to this article, even though code-meshing and using vernacular forms of English should be taught, embraced, and accepted, it is clear that they do not benefit people of color, primarily Black people in this case, in the workplace and in academia.

     In summation, different varieties of vernacular English should be embraced more in schools, however, standard convention should still be taught and the context in which standard English may be helpful should also be taught. It is important to encourage young students and teach them that their vernacular is valuable and intelligent, while also ensuring they have the communication skills that are expected in work and academic realms of their life.

 

Works Cited

Fish, Stanley. “What Should Colleges Teach?” The New York Times, The New York      Times, 25 Aug. 2009, https://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/08/24/what-should-colleges-teach/. 

Lyiscott, Jamila, director. 3 Ways to Speak English, TED, Feb. 2014, https://www.ted.com/talks/jamila_lyiscott_3_ways_to_speak_english?language=en#t-73240. Accessed 29 Oct. 2021. 

McCluney, Courtney L., et al. “The Costs of Code-Switching.” Harvard Business Review, 28 Jan. 2021, https://hbr.org/2019/11/the-costs-of-codeswitching. 

Young, Vershawn Ashanti. “Should Writers Use They Own English?” Iowa Journal of Cultural Studies, vol. 12, no. 1, 2010, pp. 110–117., https://doi.org/10.17077/2168-569x.1095. 

Proposed Solutions to Code-Meshing Within the American Education System

by Grace Tener

What is standard English? In the minds of many students, this phrase probably creates visions of MLA headings, the absence of to-be verbs, and the rules of semicolon usage. But what exactly does this mean for the education system as a whole and how can we move away from the biased standardized process that plagues how we are conditioned beginning in our youth? The process for updating the academic climate in America is complex, however, I propose a three-step process, although not completely realistic, that demonstrates a method to provide a more inclusive standard in alignment with the ideals of new generations. By updating and regulating the standard testing system, particularly through altering the AP and SAT format tests currently presented by the College Board (1), creating a new addition to the public education curriculum where a course on various dialects and culture is included in graduation requirements (2) and improving the standard English rules that students follow (3) formulating a new approach to code-meshing in academics becomes a possibility.  

  1. The introduction of standardized assessments began in the early 20th century with the entrance of the SAT and grew more heavily emphasized in the 1960s. Throughout their integration into the education system questions continued to arise about whether or not the examination process proved an efficient method of measuring intellect or instead revealed the discrepancies present between various individuals depending on the social background (Gerson). Research conducted by experts in the Annual Review of Sociology determined that the difference in test scores between students of different backgrounds had less to do with the intelligence level influenced by race or other genetic factors and instead proved examinations highlighted the privilege associated with students having access to academic resources. The arguments made by both Fish and Young do not seek to address the issues of standardized testing, their emphasis proves more focused on the topic of code-switching and the place of different dialects in the classroom. However, the standardization presence in education connects to this issue and testing contributes to this argument through enforcing the standard English rules that hinder the current education system’s ability to prove inclusive and in accordance with the evolving social structure. From personal experience, I had an admittedly skewed sample having attended predominantly private and religious institutes.                                                                   My academic exposure curriculum enlisted separate influences from that of typical public education systems. I am more focused on addressing the flaws within accessible education, as private institutes are harder to govern and demonstrate a majority of the academic advantages that skew testing results. I plan to emphasize more specifically the challenges within the public school system rather than compare it to private education.                                                         Having participated in taking the SAT during my college admissions process as well as the experience of EOGs in my youth, I understand to an extent how the content of standardized tests proves unfair to individuals of various backgrounds. Even in my encounters with education the skills necessary for success on the SAT do not align in any capacity with the curriculum I was used to. The format of the test questions specifically calls for the demonstration of knowledge on an array of topics not addressed within the classroom. The algebraic, geometric, and other math concepts prevalent on the test did not align with my particular math courses at the time of my taking the exam. The essay section as well proves subjective and separate from the typical format of narrative or book analysis compositions I was assigned in school. Several other factors contributed as well to my unpreparedness for the exam, and these disparities only significantly increase for students as you further delve into the various types of educational system shortcomings.                                                                                   Based on the current climate of society today, it is not plausible to eliminate completely a standard scale for which to measure student performance, however, it is possible to create an improved version that more accurately reflects the demographics of students today. The new test would account for different backgrounds and follow a more logical approach for questioning by addressing topics that prove beneficial towards student success. I would propose a basic math section that includes sections of lower-level statistics, percentages, and strengthening of other primary math skills. The reading comprehension portion would include a wider variety of styles of writing and the questions would be more aimed at determining a reader’s ability to access the content of a written piece then decipher it for grammatical discrepancies. The essay section as well if not completely eliminated would be altered to account for a student’s individual style and focus more on the ability to articulate an idea rather than follow a structural format. Simple changes to the examination process would vastly improve the gap in performance on standardized tests and make the overall process more accessible to all students.
  2. Another approach to code-meshing within the American education system would be through the formulation of a “new English” course of study that exposes students to various dialects and introduces them to new ideas of academic works to familiarize them with the presence of contradicting methods of writing. This would be a challenging curriculum to incorporate into the current education system seeing as the graduation requirements vary on a state level, it would be hard to regulate a new kind of instruction on a national scale. The modules themselves would combine aspects of history as well as the already present literature courses in schools to explain how historical events shaped the way we understand English today. By outlining the history of the standard English scale and appreciating other methods of expression in schools, new generations would be able to determine for themselves a method of self-expression and combine the ability to implement personal ideas with the understood way of writing.                   I hope this type of preparation for students could potentially move away from the current emphasis on one way of demonstrating knowledge in the classroom. The lectures would match both Young and Fish’s ideas on code usage in the classroom as the standard English system would not be challenged within the course but instruction on varying dialects would allow for the possibility for changes to be made in the future where code-meshing becomes a reality for all students to comprehend.
  3.  I mentioned previously that society relies on a standardized scale to govern all people and join us under a common understanding. However, the current standard English way of writing holds countless historical errors that make it no longer suitable for modern Americans. As outlined in the CCCC statement on White Language Supremacy, many present standardized systems within America remain inherently racist. The piece calls for the dismantling of WLS in favor of a new system that accounts for the perspective of BIPOC. The current approach to writing in the classroom caters to this WLS mindset and in recent years it has become more apparent that change is necessary to ensure inclusion for all students. Critical Language Awareness (CSL) proves one way in which social change can be implemented. The article’s main solution expressed a need to change current mindsets on written language. A key method in which it becomes possible for code-meshing to occur within education, efforts must be made beginning with the earliest stages of a child’s exposure to the language. It can be proven that children can retain language information easily and by changing the curriculum at the earliest stages of development the process of altering the biased system of writing to a modern version.                                                                The last way in which I believe that the flaws of the standard English language could be solved involves altercations at the earliest stages of learning. This would involve an almost entrance-level assessment of a child’s background. Similar to how immunization records are necessary for a child to attend school, I also believe an understanding of a young student’s intellectual development factors could allow for the education system to be able to possibly fit more clearly and address the needs of each individual child. By maintaining an idea of every person’s dialect and code background, the system could become less biased towards particular groups and strive to become suitable for all people to flourish within their educational environment. This idea matches with the ideas of Young and Fish as it allows for a standardization of education to exist but it changes the biased nature of the scale to fit all demographics and cultures of people and work with other social efforts to make American education more accessible to every student.

 

Works Cited

“Authentication Required.” College of Charleston Libraries Off-Campus Access, https://link-springer-com.nuncio.cofc.edu/chapter/10.1057/9781137486653_7. 

A Short History of Standardized Tests – JSTOR DAILY. https://daily.jstor.org/short-history-standardized-tests/.

“CCCC Statement on White Language Supremacy.” Conference on College Composition and Communication, 25 Aug. 2021, https://cccc.ncte.org/cccc/white-language-supremacy. 

Should Writers Use They Own English – Texas A&M University. https://liberalarts.tamu.edu/english/wp-content/uploads/sites/17/2021/01/Use-They-Own.pdf. 

“The New York Times Company.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 28 Oct. 2013, https://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/category/stanley-fish. 

“8 Ideas That Are Transforming America’s Education System.” Future Focused Education, 8 Aug. 2019, https://futurefocusededucation.org/2019/08/02/8-ideas-that-are-transforming-americas-education-system/.

Talk the Talk: Examining Code-Switching vs. Code-Meshing

by Sarah Alexander

In academic and professional spaces, the discourse surrounding the usage of code-switching and code-meshing has continually expanded in the past decade. While some believe the ability to switch between different styles of speaking and writing depending on context is a necessary one, many others view this expectation as one that forces people with various linguistic backgrounds to conform to a widely accepted standard, abandoning their own experiences, background, and individuality. As these social circles continue searching for inclusivity, these opposing viewpoints raise important questions about how each method of code variation could present itself in daily life. 

The conscious shift one makes from one form of language to another is widely known as “code-switching” (Auer). This method can in a way be viewed as the fluency in and use of multiple sub-languages that exist within a language. In contrast, another way to incorporate different language styles into speech and writing is known as “code-meshing”, a method of blending the numerous facets of one’s linguistic identity into a single, unique pattern of speech. In professional and academic circles, there is ongoing discourse concerning the effectiveness of each of these methods in various situations. While code-meshing is generally more complex and difficult to regulate, it can serve as a useful alternative in specific situations where code-switching creates barriers in communication. 

In her spoken-word essay “3 Ways to Speak English”, Jamila Lyiscott cleverly compares and contrasts the characteristics of the different patterns of speech in which she is fluent. Lyiscott emphasizes that while each form of language is different, each possesses its own set of rules that someone on the outside may not fully be aware of. She goes into detail about how each code she uses throughout her daily life is significant to her personal background and her relationships with those around her and views her ability to transition from code to code depending on the situation as an acquired skill: one that displays her vast knowledge of different forms of communication. In her speech, Lyiscott declares, “This is not a promotion of ignorance. This is a linguistic celebration,” further emphasizing the importance of keeping these three distinct forms of English separate. Each type of language holds its own significance, allowing her to be fully understood and embraced within different social circles, whether she’s conversing with her parents, greeting people she passes in the street, or having a discussion with her professor. To Lyiscott, the separation of these languages allows each of them to remain equally important in their own rights.

In contrast to Lyiscott’s perspective, many feel that the language they most regularly use represents their own multifaceted identity. Rather than taking pride in the ability to speak many types of language fluently, some appreciate possessing their own linguistic “fingerprint”” of sorts, meshing the numerous modes of speech they know into one. As Dr. Vershawn Ashanti Young points out in his essay “Should Writers Use They Own English?”, the reinforcement of the use of one particular type of language, especially within academic institutions, inadvertently implies that that style is somehow more “acceptable” than any other. This forces students who do come from different cultural backgrounds to conform and, at least momentarily, abandon the sense of identity that accompanies the language they have absorbed through personal experiences. 

While both of these contrasting perspectives offer different arguments in regards to code-meshing and code-switching, each shines light on the rigid structure currently found within schools and workplaces. Code-meshing allows students and employees to maintain the connection with their identities through the language they use, and while it may create too broad a linguistic spectrum to be fully embraced in all settings, it can and should be more commonly adopted within the classroom. Code-switching, on the other hand, places a burden on those with multiple cultural identities that simply does not exist in the minds of those who have only been conditioned from a young age to use the widely accepted standard. If academic and professional circles become more accepting of different forms of language, code-meshing could, to some extent, offer a solution that not only embraces those with multicultural backgrounds, but lends itself to a more diverse canon of writing and speaking in our communities and our world.

While code-switching is a method that sometimes places an unnecessary burden on those who are accustomed to speaking types of English that are not considered standard, it is often viewed as a necessity. According to research collected through surveys in schools, many Black students who typically use African-American Vernacular English (AAVE) report that they switch to standard English to be more readily accepted by predominantly non-Black peers (McCluney). Beyond seeking respect and avoiding harsh judgement, this type of switching is often also a tool for safety, as many survival guidelines exist that encourage Black citizens to speak in a specific manner to avoid life-threatening scenarios when interacting with police (“Get Home Safely”). These high-stakes situations clearly reinforce the need for code-switching, while also increasing its overall negative impact on the mental wellbeing of the minorities who must use it.

If the existence of codes is more widely acknowledged in schools and workplaces, hopefully, wider acceptance could be reached and the necessity for this virtually unavoidable practice could be diminished. To achieve this, code-meshing could be more intentionally incorporated into our daily lives, thus expanding the overall acceptance and use of all different types of code. Educators could begin incorporating introductory-level discussions about different types of code into the curriculum so that students have a broader understanding of the various subtypes of the language. This basic level of awareness would create a more accepting professional world for future generations. If our communities, classrooms, and workplaces can achieve a more intentional acknowledgement of codes and how they are used, we can begin to understand that each code has a unique set of rules, as Lyiscott points out in her TED Talk presentation. These rules also expand the possibilities for academic work and allow for a more personal connection to one’s writing (Gardner-Chloros). By understanding the importance of this linguistic diversity, we can begin to dismantle the hierarchy that places standard English above all other forms of speech and writing.

Code-switching, while presently a necessary skill for many in academic or professional settings, places an unfair strain on those with different backgrounds to become fluent in a specific style of widely accepted language. Meanwhile, code-meshing offers an interesting alternative that could create a much more interesting and dynamic academic landscape in the years to come. When all people are permitted to write more or less in the vernacular that flows most naturally for them, all academic work will become more meaningful and capture a wider range of perspectives. While each of these methods may not be viable in every situation, acceptance of the many different types of English that exist would undoubtedly benefit our world and eliminate the need for conformity in academic writing and speaking.

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Works Cited

Auer, Peter. Code-Switching in Conversation : Language, Interaction and Identity. Routledge, 

2002, doi:10.4324/9780203017883.

Gardner-Chloros, Penelope. Code-Switching. Cambridge University Press, 2009.

“Get Home Safely: 10 Rules of Survival.” PBS, 2019, www.pbs.org/black-culture/connect/

talk-back/10_rules_of_survival_if_stopped_by_police. Accessed 4 Nov. 2021.

Lyiscott, Jamila. “3 Ways to Speak English.” TED, 2014, www.youtu.be/k9fmJ5xQ_mc

McCluney, Courtney L., et al. “The Costs of Code-Switching.” Harvard Business Review, 15 

Nov. 2019. www.hbr.org/2019/11/the-costs-of-codeswitching. Accessed 4 Nov. 2021.

Young, Vershawn Ashanti. “Should Writers Use They Own English?” Iowa Journal of Cultural 

Studies, vol. 12, no. 1, 2010, pp. 110–117., https://doi.org/10.17077/2168-569x.1095. 

Language, Power, and Rhetorical Choice

by Corinne Kessler

Among humanity, embracing the variety of dialects is a gateway to diversity and wholesomeness within society. In the eyes of a writing teacher, he or she may believe that formal communication along with proper grammar, diction, and punctuation is the most effective form of language. However, I believe writing teachers should embrace the varieties of English as opposed to limiting the expression of ideas to “standard” grammar and diction. It is important to consider that “linguistic variation may be caused by differences in pronunciation, syntax, vocabulary, formality, and the ways in which language is used” which emphasizes how different forms of language should not be criticized for lacking formal standards (Uccelli). The wide range of dialects has much educational worth to offer, whether they are formal or informal, and possess great value in terms of the backgrounds and cultures they originate from.

Jamilia Lyiscott sheds light on this idea in her Ted Talk, “3 Ways to Speak English”, as she presents how she “code-meshes” and “code-switches” between her three different vernaculars: with her friends, in the classroom, and with her parents. It is important to note that, “each English she uses has rules and grammar, each is a language of its own, but not always recognized with such legitimacy” (Uccelli). Through being a “tri-tongued orator”, Lyiscott illustrates the value of each of her dialects in the sense that she has formed each one to suit the appropriate audience and setting. As Lyiscott unpacks what it means to be “articulate”, she explores the complicated history and present-day identity that each language represents. In doing so, Lyiscott strengthens the idea that educated ideas and worthy language does not necessarily have to be formal; just because one does not speak proper English, does not mean that their form of language lacks value or educated ideas. Lyiscott aims to emphasize to her audience that through acceptance and understanding, people can appreciate what others have to say despite being in a broken tongue or not (Lyiscott). In correspondence to Lyiscott’s message, writing teachers should embrace the abundance of dialects by acknowledging that they all tell a different story as to how the people speaking learned these languages and developed them over the course of time. 

Take the tongue Lyiscott uses to speak with her parents, for example. Lyiscott and her family are from Trinidad, and she was raised in a Black-Caribbean neighborhood in Brooklyn, New York City (Lysicott). Even though the official language of Trinidad is English, it is a very slang version which explains the broken English that Lysicott speaks with her parents. Slang, broken, or informal, this dialect still encompasses historic value; the dialect that Lyiscott’s family uses to communicate with one another reflects their background and culture which exemplifies how humanity is not limited to blossoming in one singular way. Applying this idea to the classroom, writing teachers should recognize how all humans are raised in terms of developing their language and appreciate these upbringings of language as they are all capable of possessing educated ideas.

Similar to Lyiscott, Vershawn Ashanti Young, author of, “Should Writers Use They Own English”, supports the idea of “code-meshing” and “code switching”; both Lyiscott and Young view the acceptance of various dialects as culturally enriching to the world. In terms of the development of dialects, Young claims, “much of what is learned is learned informally and often only partially” to stress that not all people are raised to speak languages in a formal manner as each origin, culture, and background approaches the learning of language with a different style (118). Furthermore, Young touches upon the evolution of dialects as he explains how, “social or cultural representations of recognizable forms of writing persist… [and] those recognizable forms of writing exist across several intellectual generations” (118). In other words, from the time dialects are rooted from their social and cultural origins, they develop and carry on as time progresses.

Lyiscott and Young both provide valuable insight as to why embracing different vernaculars is important to the development of diversity not only in the classroom, but among society as whole as well. This acceptance encourages humans to form a more inclusive community as it helps eliminate negative stereotypes and personal biases about different groups. By taking in all flavors of dialect with an open mind, this helps people recognize and respect the ways of being that are not necessarily their own. Accepting the wide range of dialects in the classroom is only a stepping stone in the direction of this movement, but it is a monumental step in working towards a more diverscially accepting society.

Sarah Alexander, A Plea for Climate Justice: The Rhetorical Situation in “Fallen Fruit”

A Plea for Climate Justice: The Rhetorical Situation in “Fallen Fruit”

In her song “Fallen Fruit”, from her 2021 album Solar Power, pop artist Lorde brings to light the heartbreaking realities of how climate change has permanently altered life for this and all future generations. She uses the song to express sentiments of frustration concerning the lack of meaningful action taken by older generations. This song effectively catches the attention of her predominantly young fanbase through unique lyrical choices as well as a deeply personal approach to the subject. Lorde’s intentional use of her music to both address climate change and criticize the actions that contributed to it is a clear example of an artistic response to a “rhetorical situation”.

As explained by Lloyd F. Bitzer, a rhetorical situation is one that holds a certain sense of urgency but also a set of limitations (5). This urgent element, also referred to as “exigence”, is often a time-sensitive issue that must somehow be addressed in an effective way by the audience as a result of the author’s rhetoric. Additionally, limitations or “constraints” in a rhetorical situation can exist in the audience’s preconceived ideas about the topic at hand or in the challenges presented by the medium through which the author delivers the rhetoric. These constraints pose unique challenges that can limit the rhetoric’s impact and the audience’s willingness to take action in regards to the exigence. The audience themselves also play a crucial role within a rhetorical situation, as they can impact the author’s choice of tone, style, or format as they bring awareness to the exigence. Each rhetorical situation presents a unique set of challenges through the countless intricacies created by the unique combination of the audience, exigence, and constraints. These three components present themselves in a unique but vivid way in the song “Fallen Fruit”.

In the rhetorical situation of this piece, the exigence can be classified as the immediate need to fully acknowledge the damage caused by climate change and redirect our actions before it progresses further. If all generations are aware of climate change and prompted to research how they can make a difference, these efforts could create a ripple effect to more sustainable practices and policies in our world. This may seem like a lofty goal, but awareness and passion for change are the crucial first steps towards action. The general population’s emotions concerning the crisis and perception of their own influence on the environment greatly affect their willingness to push for meaningful change (Hoggett 154). Once citizens realize the power their collective actions hold, the exigence can be addressed and further progress can be achieved. Lorde realizes the power of this unity among all people and attempts to heal the rift between generations that would otherwise make progress impossible. With lyrics stating, “And we will walk together… But how can I love what I know I am gonna lose?” the singer reconciles the generational gap that created a point of contentment in the song’s earlier lyrics. She ultimately extends a hand of solidarity to the older generations, implying that the only way to address this threatening exigence is through our collective effort. This approach successfully acknowledges the nuanced exigence that exists in the climate crisis.

Contrary to the song’s conclusion, which offers a feeling of unity, the earlier verses seemingly put the blame on older generations for allowing climate change to reach the irreversible level that it has. Because Lorde’s audience widely consists of the young people within her fanbase, the lyrics “To the ones who came before us… We had no idea the dreams we had were far too big” serve as an unexpected blast aimed at older generations for their lack of action on this issue. This accusation restricts her already limited audience even further by ostracizing the older listeners and creating in them a feeling of reluctance to receive its message. This limiting idea is also continually re-established in the main hook of the song which states, “You’ll leave us dancing on the fallen fruit”. However, Lorde approaches the exigence not from an activist’s perspective, but from an artist’s, letting personal sentiments take precedence over factual data. This overtly emotional plea, in a way, draws the remaining audience in nearer to the cause, which is arguably more effective in inciting change. The inescapability of climate change effects have had a significant impact on the mental wellbeing of the world’s population, which has, in turn, created a psychological barrier that prevents many from acknowledging it any further (Clayton). This continued expression of fear found in lyrics such as “We’ll disappear in the cover of the rain” creates a sense of relatability and drives listeners to dig deeper into the situation as a whole. The audience, while difficult to clearly define, is connected by the personal impact of this song and the desire to make a difference as a result.

A musical format poses many unique constraints within the deliverance of this rhetorical situation. While more people than ever have access to new music through today’s technology, this factor creates a wider platform for the constant stream of new content online through sites such as Spotify, Pandora, and YouTube, to name only a few. With the innumerable outlets available for new media, certain works inevitably get lost in the overwhelming shuffle. Additionally, while Lorde is a relatively popular artist, this song especially would likely not be heard on a radio station, which reduces its potential audience significantly. As far as preconceived notions within the audience, many citizens today are confident that climate change caused by human activity does not exist at all. On the flip side, many people acknowledge that climate change exists, but simply refuse to believe that the actions and habits of humans influence the condition of the environment  (Hoggett 196). With these skeptical attitudes being so common within our communities, Lorde’s audience is therefore limited only to people who are truly willing to listen and understand all aspects of the climate crisis. Progress is continually being made in this area, however, as “surveys show that awareness and self-reported knowledge about climate change have been rising over the last three decades” (Clayton). As the conversation surrounding environmental issues continues to progress, the potential audience for this song and this issue will grow as well. These various constraints, nonetheless, certainly restrict the song’s ability to raise meaningful awareness of the exigence. 

Although a somewhat unconventional approach to environmental activism, Lorde’s method is arguably effective, both in its format and its accessibility to the available audience. Historically speaking, music’s expressive capabilities have allowed artists to capture the emotions of their audience and direct their attention to the exigence. More specifically, the use of music to address environmental issues can even be traced back to 1963, when indigenous songwriter Peter La Farge alerted listeners to the disasters the natural world would face in his album As Long as the Grass Shall Grow (Currin). A pattern then emerged when Depeche Mode addressed environmental justice in their 1983 song  “The Landscape Is Changing”, and Dave Matthews took a similar approach in 1993 with “One Sweet World” (Currin). Clearly, there is value in the unique ability musicians have to guide the public’s consciousness towards an issue by creating works that express their own ideas or anxieties surrounding it. The personal connections created by these artists stir up a greater sense of shared responsibility within the global audience, especially in regards to environmental issues. Because of the emotional resonance that can be achieved through music, Lorde’s song offers a deep emotional appeal that could be very effective in encouraging the audience to participate in addressing the exigence. 

The constraints created by the varying beliefs people have regarding climate change, however, greatly limit the impact of this work as a response to a rhetorical situation. Oftentimes, though, when music carries a political message that could be viewed as polarizing, it is useful in creating an emotional connection and a sense of community between the artist and their listeners (Grant). These shared ideas about the world have the ability to unite people from many different communities through their shared passion towards a specific cause. The presence of such strong messages in music may be off-putting to those with different viewpoints, but it brings those willing to take action closer to the cause by creating a personal connection and sense of community. While the song may not reach the widest audience possible, that does not diminish the potential impact the available audience can have on the situation at hand within their own communities.

Lorde’s own perspective as an artist adds potential constraints and further nuance to her delivery of this song. The singer is from New Zealand, where climate change is widely taken much more seriously than in the United States and the countless other countries in which her fans reside. New Zealand even recently became the first nation in the world to require by law that its financial institutions make official reports on their environmental impacts (“NZ to launch”). Lorde’s own perspective on the climate crisis was likely impacted by the ongoing dialogue surrounding it in her home country, which likely motivated her to address this situation in her own work. Although she likely expected pushback from people who disagree with the sentiments she expresses in “Fallen Fruit”, Lorde’s fanbase primarily consists of young people who generally share her more liberal views on issues such as climate change. With this in mind, the singer likely expected she would be met with support from young fans who likely share a similar perspective on the way older generations have contributed to this crisis over time. Because of this shared ideology, the available audience is more willing to connect with and fully absorb the song’s message. By sharing her personal ideas surrounding the subject, including the negative feelings surrounding it, Lorde has carved out a niche for an audience whose beliefs more or less align with her own.

Lorde’s stylistic choices within “Fallen Fruit” also greatly shape the overall impact of the song on its audience. Prior to the album Solar Power, Lorde’s musical style could be described as a polished, electronic sound. With “Fallen Fruit” and the other songs on the album, however, she took on an entirely different creative approach. Acoustic instruments and drums have a much larger presence in these songs, creating a more natural and grounded musical atmosphere. This earthy quality found within the instrumental backing lends itself to the overall theme surrounding the natural world’s majesty, which ties into the exigence of the climate crisis. This use of auditory tools and cues help establish a more clear purpose for the rhetoric as a whole. These uncharacteristic creative choices help the situation stand out in a more authentic way and allow Lorde to deliver the exigence more effectively.

Through the use of powerful lyrical choices and unapologetic emotional honesty, Lorde effectively brings to light the rhetorical situation surrounding climate change in “Fallen Fruit”. As its effects continue to worsen each year, the exigence brought on by this situation calls for immediate action from people across all generations. Certain constraints limit the audience’s ability to wholeheartedly accept the song’s message, but nonetheless, a dedicated audience exists, ready to fully acknowledge the exigence. This song serves as a clear example of one of the countless ways in which a rhetorical situation may be addressed, both creatively and effectively. 

 

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Clayton, Susan, and Christie Manning. Psychology and Climate Change: Human Perceptions,

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Currin, Grayson Haven. “Music For Our Emergency.” NPR. 5 Dec. 2019. 

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Lucy Angulo, Addressing the Climate Crisis

Addressing the Climate Crisis

            Greta Thunberg has become known worldwide for her intense activism and passion for climate change. At just 15 years old, she was protesting outside the Swedish parliament to combat increasing carbon emissions. And just three years later, she has become known worldwide for her activism and demonstrations. One of her most memorable and influential speeches took place in 2019 at the U.N Climate Action Summit. Her speech that day not only impacted the minds and hearts of millions across the world, but also called out world leaders for their inaction pertaining to climate change. Beginning her speech with “My message is that we’ll be watching you”, to disclose to world leaders and governments it is their responsibility and duty to combat the climate crisis instead of leaving it up to the younger generations to somehow come up with a solution before time runs out. She goes on to criticize world leaders for their inaction these past 30 years despite knowing the scientific facts: “For more than 30 years, the science has been crystal clear. How dare you look away and come here saying that you’re doing enough, when the politics and solutions needed are still nowhere in sight” (Staff N.P.R). She speaks directly to her audience without any hesitation or fear. Greta’s speech that she gave at the U.N. Climate Action Summit can be considered a rhetorical situation due to its exigence, audience, and constraints.

          Lloyd F. Bitzer defines the rhetorical situation “as a natural context of persons, events, objects, relations, and an exigence which strongly invites utterance” (4). Greta Thunberg’s speech at the U.N. Climate Action Summit is considered a rhetorical situation because there were certain circumstances that prompted her response. A rhetorical situation also consists of three factors- the exigence, audience, and the constraints. The exigence of a rhetorical situation is “an imperfection marked by urgency; it is a defect, an obstacle, something waiting to be done, a thing which is other than it should be” (Bitzer 6). Therefore, the exigence of Greta’s situation is simply the inaction of world leaders pertaining to the climate crisis. Their failure to take action has left the responsibility up to younger generations, simply making them pay the consequences of the generations before them. The exigence is rhetorical because her audience can change their inaction to action by reducing carbon emissions, implementing greener policies, and much more; there are multitude of ways that the audience can bring change.

        In addition, the exigence “holds great significance because it focuses on the audience and the change that needs to be made.” (7). Simply put, the exigence influences who the audience is and therefore the changes that can be made. The exigence also influences the linguistic choices of the speaker- how they chose their tone or convey their message. The most prominent rhetorical choice Greta makes in her speech is her decision to express her anger/disappoint by saying how dare you to her audience. She repeats this multiple times throughout the speech, one example being “We are in beginning of a mass extinction, and all you can talk about is money and fairy tales of eternal economic growth. How dare you!” (staff N.P.R). This rhetorical choice criticizes her audience that consists of world leaders and officials, who are responsible for her being here in this situation today. Therefore, depending on the exigence, especially the urgency of the exigence, an author’s choice of language and tone might change. In addition, it is crucial to clearly express the exigence to the audience in a rhetorical situation. Not only does Greta use emotion and criticization, but she also uses statistics to support the exigence. She presents to the audience that “The popular idea of cutting our emissions in half in 10 years gives us a 50% chance of staying below 1.5 Celsius, and risk of setting off irreversible change reactions beyond human control” (Staff N.P.R). The use of statistics in Greta’s speech emphasizes the exigence of inaction concerning climate change. The use of statistics and emotion is a rhetorical choice concerning the combination of logos and pathos, both presented to the audience through her tone and choice of words. Her emotion of distress, anger, and disappointment is quite clear to the audience and can significantly persuade them. There are additional rhetorical choices that influence the situation such as her body language, voice, and facial expressions that express her emotion to the audience, which a very useful tactic as stated by the association of psychology: “research shows that people tend toward appeals that aren’t simply more positive or negative but are infused with emotionality, even when they’re trying to sway an audience that may not be receptive to such language” (Matthew D. Rocklage 1). As mentioned before, statistics support the exigence, but they also display her credibility when it comes to the climate crisis. It is also important to note Greta’s choice of statements instead of questions, she is demanding change, not asking for it. These choices can affect how the audience responds and what their opinion of the speaker is.

     The next component of a rhetorical situation is the audience. The audience for Greta’s rhetorical situation consists of world leaders and government officials because as Bitzer mentions, the audience “consists only of those persons who are capable of being influenced by discourse and of being mediators of change” (7). She talks directly to these leaders and officials because they are the ones responsible for changing their actions to solve the exigence. Greta demands change from her audience telling them, “We will not let you get away with this. Right here, right now is where we draw the line. The world is waking up. And change, is coming, whether you like it or not” (Staff N.P.R). Although people can combat climate change on a local and individual level, there also needs to be changes on a global level, as we have let our earth deteriorate more and more every year. As Shelley Boulianne and David Ilkiw state in their article on climate change, “solutions require global interventions” (School Strike 4 Climate 209). Therefore, in this specific rhetorical situation, Greta has to convince people of all different origins and beliefs to work together to solve this issue. Her rhetorical choices to speak informally to her audience and criticize them is very influential as it makes these world leaders and officials feel responsible for the issue at hand. She does not shy away from her audience of powerful people, instead she is sharing her and anger with them by saying “You are failing us. But the young people are starting to understand your betrayal. The eyes of all future generations are upon you. And if you choose to fail us, I say: We will never forgive you” (Staff N.P.R). Her word choice such as ‘we will never forgive you’ is such an important rhetorical choice. As mentioned before, it is not typical that a 16-year-old speaks at the U.N Climate Action Summit, nevertheless criticizes some of the most powerful and influential people in the world. This rhetorical choice creates discomfort and discomfort usually leads to change, which is the goal of a rhetorical situation.

This specific rhetorical situation also has a secondary audience. Even though Greta is addressing world leaders and government officials, she is being heard by millions of citizens from a variety of countries, as it was broadcasted to viewers at home. This secondary audience is rhetorical because Greta’s speech can influence citizens to want more change and action from their leaders and therefore put pressure on them to start solving the ongoing climate crisis. The power of her speech can spark a movement by influencing people of all ages. Throughout history, it has been shown that people’s attention to climate change increases when there has been a natural disaster such as hurricane or government broadcasted conferences or when an issue is brought up in the senate or house. Therefore, Greta can focus more people’s attention on the climate change because as Boulianne and Ilkiw note in their article noting “Public opinion research shows that concern about climate change fluctuates over time with key events triggering increased concern”. (School Strike 4 Climate 209). Her speech is that key event that triggers the secondary audience of citizens who can influence the primary audience, who then in turn affect the exigence. Greta makes the rhetorical choice to not use complicated vocabulary or confusing statistics, which allows her to get straight to the point and both her audiences can clearly understand the exigence. In a rhetorical situation, the audience is more likely to solve the exigence if they fully understand the exigence. Therefore, educating the secondary audience on the urgency of the issue will pressure world leaders and officials to make a change.

The final component of a rhetorical situation is the constraints. According to Bitzer, constraints are “made up of persons, events, objects, and relations which are parts of the situation because they have the power to constrain decision and action needed to modify the exigence” (8). Constraints can have a negative or positive impact on the rhetorical situation. The constraints of this specific situation include the medium, the audience, difficulty to make global change, and Greta herself as she is the speaker in the rhetorical situation. The medium for the primary audience is through speech, as she speaks directly to them in the room where the summit is held. This medium positively influences the situation because of the close proximity between her and the audience, creating a relationship. This allows the audience to read her body language and truly hear the passion in her voice. The speech takes place in a large, dark room, with only light shining onto the stage. The audience also has headphones on and are seated based off their geographical location. The lightening on the stage draw’s people attention to Greta, as the dark room allows little distraction. The headphones also limit distraction because headphones reduce communication and conversation between the audience. Overall, the medium through which she shares her speech, influences the rhetorical situation in a positive manner.

       As for the secondary audience, the medium is through broadcasting. Millions of people in all different areas in the world could watch Greta with just a click of a button. Her speech was broadcasted live through PBS. In addition, Greta’s speech has become quite popular which has people continuing to watch her speech today on YouTube or other websites. Her speech was able to get even more attention through broadcasting, making it more likely for citizens to pressure world leaders and officials to solve the ongoing climate crisis. Another constraint that can be worked into the medium is the length of the speech. It is around 5 minutes long, which is just enough time to convey her message and demand change without losing the interest of the audience.

        Another constraint that plays a huge role in the situation is the audience. In this rhetorical situation pertaining to Greta, the primary audience is a greater constraint than the secondary audience. If world leaders and governments are close-minded when it comes to climate change, then they’ll most likely not be influenced by Greta’s speech because they have already decided they won’t be changing any policies. Some world leaders might come in with beliefs that climate change doesn’t even exist which then constrains the situation again. Also, the primary audience is always thinking about the economic impacts to society. Some leaders might hear climate change and immediately associate it with a lot of expenses, therefore they are not willing to solve the exigence.

     The age of the audience is another constraint in the situation. Greta’s primary audience consists of older generations that were not born into a world where there was a ticking time bomb on earth. Therefore, it might not be seen as a pertinent issue. In fact, Shelly Boulianne and David Iikiw note “Young people are more likely to express concern and believe in the anthropogenic origins of climate change” (“School Strike 4 Climate” 209). Therefore, the older age of the audience represents a constraint in the situation.

            The difficulty to make change on a global scale can also be considered a constraint within the situation. Throughout history, nations have not been able to come together to make an effective and efficient plan to slow the warming of our planet. As stated by Brad Plumer and Henry Fountain in the New York Times Article ‘A Hotter Future is Certain’, “Nations have delayed curbing their fossil-fuel emissions for so long that they can no longer stop global warming from intensifying over the next 30 years” (1). The difference in politics, origin, and geographical location does contribute to the difficulty of making change on a global scale if the whole audience doesn’t have the same goal in mind.

     Greta herself is also a constraint. Even though she has become known worldwide and is an influential figure, she is still a 16-year-old girl. It is possible that her audience might believe her knowledge on climate change is limited or that she doesn’t understand the economic challenges cleaner policies pose. On the other hand, her status and support also enable the situation. She sort of proves her credibility just by the fact that she is a 16-year-old girl speaking at the U.N Climate Action Summit. She also makes the choice to wear casual clothing, a simple pink shirt and army green pants. Her audience and those around her are all wearing professional clothing as they are at a very professional event. However, her clothing is a rhetorical choice as it emphasizes the point she made in the beginning of her speech, “This is all wrong. I shouldn’t be up here. I should be back in school on other side of the ocean. Yet you call come to us young people for hope. How dare you” (Staff N.P.R). Her clothes represent that she is a child, a child that is not responsible for solving the climate crisis. This is just another factor that influences the audience to feel guilty and responsible for climate change.

    Greta’s use of rhetorical moves such as strong emotion, certain word choices, and her outfit emphasize the importance and urgency of the exigence. By speaking directly to her audience, she brings these world leaders and government officials down to her level, not hesitating to call them out for their inaction. She gave herself the power in the situation and most likely left a lasting impact on audience, influencing them to take action and finally figure out a solution to this never-ending problem. The statistics she shares about how much time our world has left is a strong rhetorical choice; it uses fear to encourage change. Greta Thunberg effectively responded to the rhetorical situation, as she successfully conveyed the exigence and responded appropriately to her audience. In fact, the Guardian even mentioned that just “days after, millions of young people joined protests worldwide to demand emergency action on climate change” (1). In addition, “leaders also gathered for the annual United Nations general assembly aiming to inject fresh momentum into efforts to curb carbon emissions.” (Guardian 1.) This response by citizens and world leaders proves that Greta’s response to the rhetorical situation was effectual and successful. Greta’s speech will continue to impact and encourage people of all ages, encouraging them to fight for our planet because we cannot solve this problem alone.

 

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Bitzer, Lloyd F. “The Rhetorical Situation.” Philosophy& Rhetoric, vol. 25, 1992, pp. 1–14.

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Climate Change.” Media and Communication, vol. 8, no. 2S1, 15 Apr. 2020, pp. 208+. Gale Academic OneFile, link.gale.com/apps/doc/A626675405/AONE?u=cofc_main&sid=bookmark-AONE&xid=9d80841b. Accessed 8 Oct. 2020

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Matthew D. Rocklage, Association for Psychological Science. “People use emotion to persuade,

even when it could backfire.” ScienceDaily. ScienceDaily, 2 April 2018. <www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2018/04/180402085846.htm>.

Staff, N. P. R. (2019, September 23). Transcript: Greta Thunberg’s speech at the U.N. Climate Action Summit. NPR. Retrieved October 15, 2021, from https://www.npr.org/2019/09/23/763452863/transcript-greta-thunbergs-speech-at-the-u-n-climate-action-summit.

 

 

Enough is Enough: TIME Magazine’s Response to a Rhetorical Situation – Sophia Brown

Enough is Enough: TIME Magazine’s Response to a Rhetorical Situation

On Valentine’s Day of 2018, a shooter entered Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School in Parkland, Florida and took the lives of seventeen people. The nation reacted in horror as yet another instance of gun violence in schools was stamped in the history books of America. But as the community of Parkland and the rest of the country mourned the loss of life, a sense of urgency and responsibility to prevent another devastating school shooting began to gain traction. This was felt most strongly among the witnesses of the shooting: Parkland’s own students. These students spear-headed a nation-wide (and arguably world-wide) movement known as March for Our Lives in an effort to halt gun violence in the United States and did so with immense bravery and passion. TIME Magazine best captured this movement when it featured five leaders of March for Our Lives on its cover of March 2018, with “ENOUGH.” plastered in bold lettering across the foreground. With this simple yet profound cover, TIME Magazine utilizes various aspects of rhetoric, including visual and textual elements, to effectively address the issue of gun violence in schools across the country. More specifically, TIME Magazine appropriately responds to the “rhetorical situation.”

As best put by American rhetorician Lloyd F. Bitzer, a rhetorical situation is defined as a “natural context of persons, events, objects, relations, and an exigence which strongly invites utterance” (4). In short, a rhetorical situation is a specific occasion that requires an appropriate rhetorical response. It should be noted that a rhetorical situation consists of three elements: exigence, audience, and constraint. Firstly, Bitzer explains that exigence is the issue that prompts the rhetorical response (6). Secondly, in terms of a rhetorical situation, Bitzer defines audience as people who are “capable of being influenced” by the rhetoric and then can act as “mediators of change” (7). Lastly, the constraints of a situation include anything that has the “power to constrain decision and action” that would be necessary to mediate the exigence (8). Constraint can exist in a rhetorical situation in various forms, from a reader’s personal beliefs to the medium in which a text is presented. Additionally, constraints can also stem from the rhetor themself. To fully comprehend the rhetorical situation presented by TIME Magazine, it is essential to understand the three fundamentals of exigence, audience, and constraint. 

In TIME Magazine’s rhetorical situation, the exigence is the need to address the issue of gun violence in the wake of the Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School shooting. It is also important to acknowledge the backdrop of this situation, as the United States has been afflicted by a history of deaths as a result of gun violence. According to the book When Students Protest: Secondary and High Schools, more than thirty thousand cases of gun-related deaths occur in the United States annually (Bessant and Lohmeyer 39). With this context in mind, the TIME Magazine cover brings attention to the mounting calls of young students, particularly those of the Parkland students of the March for Our Lives organization, to restrict the usage of assault weapons in the United States. As best explained by the March for Our Lives website, the intention is to put a complete end to the unnecessary deaths of students due to gun violence and to create a world in which the country is “free from gun violence in all of its forms” (“How We Save Lives”). The exigence in this situation is rhetorical because if enough people demanded stricter gun reform across the country, politicians and lawmakers would be potentially more inclined to deliver policies that would ensure gun safety. In turn, this would create less occurrences of shootings, particularly in school settings. The fact that the exigence is capable of being modified is fitting of Bitzer’s description of exigence, as well. 

The rhetorical audience in this circumstance is the many readers of TIME Magazine across America who consume this text in either a digital or print form. The audience can also be classified as rhetorical because the readers are capable of being influenced and being mediators of change in the push for gun control. It is important to note the demographics when considering the audience, as well. According to a media bias evaluation by website All Sides, TIME Magazine is a left-leaning publication (“Time Magazine”). Therefore, one can assume that the primary base of TIME’s audience holds more democratic beliefs. Furthermore, TIME magazine traditionally has a generally older audience. According to a study conducted in 2016, the average age of a reader of this publication was fifty years old (Gaille). However, with the popularization of digital media in recent years, the magazine has become accessible to those of younger generations. A 2017 survey found that TIME was the second-most read or subscribed magazine among readers aged thirteen to thirty-five (“What Magazines Are Millennials & Gen Z Actually Reading?”). These demographics are crucial in understanding the audience because it impacts how receptive an audience member will be to receiving the message that TIME Magazine is attempting to communicate. 

The constraints of this situation include the audience demographics, the medium of the text, and the knowledge that is required to fully comprehend the text. Firstly, the audience can be considered a constraint because of its previously mentioned age and political demographics. Because TIME readers are more likely to be liberal, the magazine is able to publish content that a more conservative audience would be less accepting of. In this case, stricter gun control is a polarizing issue that conservatives are typically not in favor of. In contrast, liberals tend to support the passing of more restrictive gun laws. Consequently, TIME Magazine has the ability to comfortably print a cover with such a strong statement against gun use because they are aware that their message will most likely register with its left-leaning audience and that their rhetoric will not fall upon deaf ears. Furthermore, it is important to observe the ages of TIME Magazine’s audience as a constraint. As stated beforehand, the ages of TIME’s readers vary, with most of its print readers being older and its digital readers being younger. In this situation, it can be said that a younger audience will most likely connect with the rhetoric of the magazine cover because it is centered around the issue of gun violence in schools. With this in mind, an older audience may not be as understanding of the goals of the younger population in regard to curbing gun accessibility. 

The medium of the text can be considered a constraint, as it is in the form of a magazine cover. Due to the expansion of digital media, one could argue that print magazines are in decline and are not as widespread. As a result, this potentially constrains the accessibility of this text, especially in print form, among its target audience. However, with the popularization of digital publications comes greater availability to media across online platforms. TIME Magazine happens to fall into this category, as the magazine has an online website featuring its articles and cover stories. In turn, the audience is able to more easily access its content, including the March 2018 cover. 

In addition to the audience demographics and the text’s medium, the knowledge necessary to understand the text could be considered a constraint because the text is responding to an incredibly layered, multifaceted situation that requires contextual information. While this cover is addressing the shooting that occurred at Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School, it is also taking into account the preceding cases of gun violence that have plagued the country. According to the Sandy Hook Promise, there have been 1,316 school shootings in the United States since the year of 1970 (“16 Facts About Gun Violence and School Shootings”). Without understanding the context of school shootings in the history of the United States, one cannot not understand the urgency of the text’s message. Moreover, it is essential to be aware of who the figures featured on the cover of the magazine are: Emma González, David Hogg, Cameron Kasky, Alex Wind, and Jaclyn Corin. The audience simply cannot interpret the significance of this TIME Magazine cover without having the previous knowledge that these five students were witnesses to the Parkland shooting. It is also vital for the audience to know that the students are leaders of the March for Our Lives movement and are strong supporters of gun control and reform. With these pieces of information, the audience can entirely register the text’s rhetoric and the gravity of the single word emboldened on the magazine’s cover: “ENOUGH.”  

With all the exigence, audience, and constraints taken into account, one is able to more adequately evaluate the text’s overall effectiveness in its endeavor to respond to the rhetorical situation. This text can be considered appropriate for the situation because it tactfully utilizes numerous rhetorical elements and strategies to respond to the exigence, appeal to its audience, and utilizes its constraints. For instance, TIME Magazine applies multiple modes of communication in its text that enhance its efficacy. Explained by literary scholars at the New London Group, modes of communication are deliberate aspects of a text that exist to skillfully convey a message to an audience (Ball, et al. 14). Of the five modes of communication (visual, spatial, aural, gestural, linguistic), TIME’s 2018 cover best utilizes the visual and gestural modes of communication. Visually, the magazine cover is simple in its composition. It features the Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School student-activists, the iconic TIME lettering in the background, and “ENOUGH.” in bold print in the foreground. However, this uncomplicated design is incredibly impactful because it is direct and blunt; the reader can immediately grasp the intended response of the magazine cover. The fact that the word “ENOUGH” is in bold across the front of the cover also adds to its unambiguous nature because it clearly communicates the text’s message. Finally, the famous TIME Magazine logo is a visual aid in this situation because it adds a layer of credibility, since TIME is a publication known across the globe for its reporting and dialogue on current events. As for the gestural mode of communication (gestures, expressions, etc.), the cover expresses its message primarily through the body language and facial expressions of the Parkland activists. All five of the students in the photograph have a serious, somber look about them as they stare directly into the lens of the camera. In particular, the body language of Emma Gonzáles (front) is also incredibly telling, as her arms are crossed in front of her body to convey a no-nonsense attitude. These gestural elements are an integral part in the overall function of the rhetorical response because they evoke feelings in the audience and appeal to pathos, which in turn creates an investment in the response that TIME is attempting to impart regarding the issue of gun control. On the whole, TIME Magazine’s cover is a fitting response to the situation because it incorporates powerful rhetorical elements that directly address the exigence and the audience while utilizing constraints.

Though gun violence in schools is a heavy, multilayered topic, TIME Magazine’s cover expertly brings the issue to the forefront with a call to action. Using the three components of the rhetorical situation (exigence, audience, and constraints), TIME is able to directly respond to the national matter regarding gun violence and gun control and to appeal to its more liberal audience. Though limited by certain factors, such as the convoluted context required to understand the situation, the magazine also makes use of its constraints. Additionally, the visual and gestural modes of communication featured on the magazine cover reinforces the overall strength of the rhetorical response through layout, composition, and human expression. The TIME Magazine cover of March 2018 is incredibly impactful not only in the rhetorical sense, but in its greater significance in the context of the United States’ history. The cover powerfully communicated the urgent need for substantial change in the gun laws of the country with a single word: enough.

 

Works Cited

Ball, Cheryl E., and Kristin L. Arola. “What Are Multimodal Projects?” Writer/Designer, edited by Jennifer Sheppard, Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2018, p. 14. Accessed 7 Oct. 2021.

Bessant, Judith, and Ben A. Lohmeyer. When Students Protest: Secondary and High Schools, Rowman & Littlefield, 2021, p. 39, books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=zi89EAAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PA145&dq=goals+of+the+march+for+our+lives&ots=IhfNmeiETr&sig=fu1KoRTbVRc_EqVrpRaeLd3D1V4#v=onepage&q=goals%20of%20the%20march%20for%20our%20lives&f=false. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

Bitzer, Lloyd F. “The Rhetorical Situation.” Philosophy & Rhetoric, vol. 25, 1992, pp. 4, 6-8. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/40237697. Accessed 5 October 2021.

Gaille, Brandon. “43 Distressing Time Magazine Demographics.” BrandonGaille.com, 14 Jan. 2017, brandongaille.com/43-distressing-time-magazine-demographics/. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

“How We Save Lives.” March For Our Lives, March Four Our Lives, 19 Aug. 2021, marchforourlives.com/policy/. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

“What Magazines Are Millennials & Gen Z Actually Reading?” YPulse, YPulse, 16 Oct. 2017, www.ypulse.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/What_Magazines_Are_Millennials_Gen_Z_Actually_Reading_10.16.2017.pdf. Accessed 14 Oct. 2021.

“Time Magazine.” AllSides, AllSides.com, 1 Mar. 2021, www.allsides.com/news-source/time-magazine-news-media-bias. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021. 

“16 Facts About Gun Violence and School Shootings.” Sandy Hook Promise, Sandy Hook Promise, 9 Sept. 2021, www.sandyhookpromise.org/gun-violence/16-facts-about-gun-violence-and-school-shootings/. Accessed 14 Oct. 2021.

TJ Heck – How Patagonia’s Ad Changed the View of Clothing

How Patagonia’s Ad Changed the View of Clothing

Patagonia is a nationally known American company created in 1993 by Yvon Chouinard, specializing in the production, sale, and maintenance of outdoor clothing. Not only is Patagonia the lead merchant of outdoor clothing, but the company also ranked 1 out of 100 in regards to reputation according to the Axios Harris Poll (“The 2021″ 1). Much of this current reputation

may be attributed to an ad the company released on Black Friday of 2011. By doing so, Patagonia responded through this ad to consumers everywhere. The ad, contradictory to what a business wants you to do, spend your money with them, prompts the consumer to do the opposite, and think about whether purchasing that item is ‘necessary’. One might say this is counterintuitive or rhetorical if you will.

Rhetorical situations are those comprised of “a complex of persons, events, objects, and relations presenting an actual or potential exigence which can be completely or partially removed if discourse, introduced into the situation, can so constrain human decision or action as to bring about the significant modification of the exigence” (Bitzer 6). In short, these situations, intentional or not, induce the

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audience to critically analyze the meaning behind them on a deeper level. While many occurrences can be constituted as rhetorical situations, rhetorical situations contain exigence and an audience, which prevent every situation from being rhetorical. Exigence, “an imperfection marked by urgency; it is a defect, an obstacle, something waiting to be done, a thing which is other than it should be” (Bitzer 6). In the Patagonia ad, the exigence is the issue of fast fashion and its effects on the environment. Finally, the audience of a rhetorical situation is limited to those “persons who are capable of being influenced by discourse and of being mediators of change” (Bitzer 8). When Bitzer states mediators of change, he is further explaining that this is an element rhetorical situations must involve.

The ad as shown above seems contradictory to what an ad’s purpose is. Ads target viewers of all sorts to persuade them to do something; whether that be to embark on a trip, try a new product, experience something new, and even apply for a job. The purpose of ads, much like an author’s, is to either persuade, inform, or entertain the reader. In terms of Patagonia’s ad, it can be concluded that the purpose is to respond to an ethical issue at a moral level, completely opposite to the stereotypical ads we see daily. Ultimately, Patagonia wants consumers to take a step back and reflect on their consumer behavior; this reflection is prompted by listing how their product impacts the environment negatively. The timing of this ad can be noteworthy as well. With the drastic increase of clothing produced in the last decade, Patagonia is providing the beginning steps of a solution to the problem through this ad.

When determining to whom this ad is for, it is imperative to think about both, who the customers of Patagonia are as well as the readers of the New York Times, where the ad was published. Initially, one might say that the intended audience was and remains to be consumers in general. That is not the case. Like all advertisements, the point of them is to persuade the

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reader to do something, in this case, think twice about buying a jacket. On account of this, however, consumers in this instance constitute a portion of individuals that are more elite, ones that recognize this ad as a rhetorical situation, not as a selling point. The demographic of Patagonia’s customers consists of “ men and women aged 18-35, […] with disposable income[s], […]active lifestyle[s], enjoy[ment] [of] nature and outdoors, [and] value for quality products” (Patagonia: Where). Similarly, the New York Times’ “readership is 51% male and 49% female, meaning that men and women read it equally. Most of its readers are young — 34% are aged 30–49, and 29% are aged 18–29. It attracts people from all income classes, but most (38%) earn more than $75,000 a year” (Djordjevic). From these statistics, it can be presumed that the ad is presented to a relatively younger audience who make ‘liveable’ wages either individually or in pairs. What else does this generalization of individuals have in common? The majority of them lean left on the political spectrum. It can be inferred that since the consumers of Patagonia support a company that urges the “need to elect climate leaders”, that they are in agreement with that statement as well (Campbell). Additionally, Djordjevic states that of all readers of the New York Times, “91% of its readers identify as Democrats.” Overall, it can be concluded that the intended audience of this ad is left-leaning, millennial individuals who want change.

The exigence that Patagonia is referencing through their ad is consumption. More specifically, the consumption habits of consumers in this day and age in relation to clothing, otherwise known as fast fashion. Fast Fashion as a term can be briefly summarized as “cheap clothes bought and cast aside in rapid succession as trends change” (Davis). While this definition seems harmless and innocuous, every aspect of this practice produces negative effects on the environment. Due to the speed at which clothing is now being produced, the material is mostly synthetic, as plants like cotton cannot be harvested quickly enough for the demand. As a result,

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this synthetic material will not
decay as cotton would,
accumulating more waste for a
longer period of time. In addition to
this, articles of clothing now use
significant amounts of water and
chemicals to meet demand, both of
which deplete and pollute one of the
most important natural resources we
have on Earth. The clothing
factories and modes of transportation of said articles account for 10% of global emissions (Charpail). Finally, clothing that is not sold in addition to the percent of clothing and not worn accounts for about 80% of the total clothing waste (Morgan McFall-Johnsen). Furthermore, the discarded clothing is typically sent back to the impoverished that created the clothing due to how cheap it is to discard them there as opposed to more developed nations. The entire process in which fast fashion operates is extremely immoral and careless. It is through initiatives like Patagonia’s that things may be changing for the better.

One obvious constraint of this ad would inevitably be those that do not fit the category of the intended audience. Those individuals who are not conceptualizing the purpose of the ad are those that either lack knowledge on the issue or maintain lower regard for said issue. This ad that Patagonia published is in response to the growing fast fashion industry. More characteristically, educating and combating the issue through their actions. The perfect way to describe this is in the words of Patagonia’s Chief Product Officer Lisa Williams, “A root of the problem lies in our

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excessive consumerism: we buy 10 while our grandmothers bought 2.” This idea of bigger and better has been a trend gaining traction for years. This consumption behavior has manifested itself into various aspects of our lives, especially those related to clothing. Take a second to think about how frivolous we as consumers have become compared to just generations before us. Especially within the younger generation, Generation Z, the rise of consumerism in the fast fashion industry remains highly threatening to our environment. Through the education of consumers, constraints will not be as prominent in this issue to then catalyze change. Another constraint of this ad would be that some individuals would immediately look away once they saw the brand Patagonia. This would be because the average price of a jacket is almost $300, a price which many cannot justify. One affordance of this ad is the way it has spread to competitor companies. Consumers see this response and begin to expect the same from other companies. When said companies change their sustainability habits, this problem of fast fashion should, in theory, decrease as major retailers change their ways.

Patagonia, however, has made its audience aware of the effect clothing has on the environment. For this reason, they have released details about how they as a company will combat this issue. The company has launched a program called, “The Worn Wear Program” which operates as an online store to send and purchase used Patagonia products rather than purchasing new ones. Customers are
encouraged to send the articles they no
longer wear for credit towards used and
new products. In addition to this program,
Patagonia has joined “1% For The Planet”
which is a nonprofit organization that

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allocates 1% of gross incomes from companies into acts that will prolong the life of the Earth. The greatest way Patagonia is changing the way their clothing is made is through their substance. The company claims to use only cotton that is grown organically. The company also uses almost 75% of recycled materials in their current manufactured products. Similar to how persistent fast fashion is to negatively impact the environment, Patagonia shares that persistence is positively impacting the environment.

In contemplating the effectiveness of this ad, it is in the hands of those within the intended audience. Being a part of that group accedes to the fact that this advertisement is effective, in more than one way. The ad was effective in terms of sales, “sales rose 30% following the campaign” (Explains). Because of record-breaking sales and the consistent clientele following the ad, Patagonia was able to donate millions of dollars to various organizations to protect the environment. On a greater scale, this advertisement paved the way for other companies to do the same, meaning identifying malpractices and investing in the future of the Earth. Subsequently, the purpose of this ad since its publishing remains to educate those about the non-monetary cost of clothing, but the effects it has on our environment. Through the remarks on their advertisement which read, “WE make useful gear that lasts a long time YOU don’t buy what you don’t need WE help you repair your Patagonia gear YOU pledge to fix what’s broken WE help find a home for Patagonia gear you no longer need YOU sell or pass it on WE will take back your Patagonia gear that is worn out YOU pledge to keep your stuff out of the landfill and incineration” and their mission statement, Patagonia believes it, “is true of all the things we can make and you can buy, this jacket comes with an environmental cost higher than its price. There is much to be done and plenty for us all to do. Don’t buy what you don’t need. Think twice before you buy anything (Patagonia).

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Bick, Rachel, and Erika Halsey. “The Global Environmental Injustice of Fast Fashion.”

Environmental Health, vol. 17, no. 92, 27 Dec. 2018. BioMed Central,

https://doi.org/10.1186/s12940-018-0433-7. Accessed 3 Oct. 2021.
Bitzer, Lloyd F. “The Rhetorical Situation.” Philosophy & Rhetoric, vol. 1, no. 1, 1968, pp. 1-14.

JSTOR, www.jstor.org.nuncio.cofc.edu/stable/40236733. Accessed 5 Oct. 2021. Campbell, Maeve. “Patagonia Gets Political with Labels Saying ‘Vote the A**holes Out.'”

EuroNews.green, 16 Sept. 2018, www.euronews.com/green/2020/09/16/patagonia-gets-political-with-labels-saying-vote-t he-a-holes-out. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

Charpail, Mathidle. “Fashion’s Environmental Impact.” Sustain Your Style, 2017, www.sustainyourstyle.org/old-environmental-impacts. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

Davies, Nalah. Patagonia Mission Statement. 28 July 2021.
Davis, Nikola. “Fast fashion Speeding Toward Environmental Disaster.” The Guardian, 7 april

2020, www.theguardian.com/fashion/2020/apr/07/fast-fashion-speeding-toward-environmental- disaster-report-warns. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

Djordjevic, Milos. “25 Insightful New York Times Readership Statistics [The 2021 Edition].” Letter.ly, 14 Mar. 2021, letter.ly/new-york-times-readership-statistics/. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

“Don’t Buy This Jacket.” The New York Times [New York City], 25 Nov. 2015.
Explains, Kenji. “‘Don’t Buy This Jacket’ — Patagonia’s Daring Campaign.” Better Marketing,

june 2020,

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bettermarketing.pub/dont-buy-this-jacket-patagonia-s-daring-campaign-2b37e145046b#: ~:text=Though%20the%20ad%20wasn’t,of%20an%20increasingly%20pressing%20probl em.&text=The%20proliferation%20of%20fast%20fashion,of%20consumerism%20on%2 0the%20environment. Accessed 7 Oct. 2021.

“How Can We Reduce Our Fashion Environmental Impact?” Sustain Your Style, www.sustainyourstyle.org/en/reducing-our-impact. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

Morgan McFall-Johnsen, Morgan. “The Fashion Industry Emits More Carbon than International Flights and Maritime Shipping Combined. Here Are the Biggest Ways It Impacts the Planet.” The Insider, octob 2019, www.businessinsider.com/fast-fashion-environmental-impact-pollution-emissions-waste- water-2019-10. Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.

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“Patagonia: Where Do They Stand?” Katesblog, University of Brighton Blog Network site, 14

Dec. 2018, blogs.brighton.ac.uk/katesblog/2018/12/14/patagonia-where-do-they-stand/.

Accessed 6 Oct. 2021.
The True Cost of Fast Fashion. Produced by The Economist, 2019. “The 2021 Axios Harris Poll 100 Reputation Rankings.” Axios. Axios,

www.axios.com/the-2021-axios-harris-poll-100-reputation-rankings-af44bec1-4e00-4af4- 9952-7bf4caa06cd6.html. Accessed 5 Oct. 2021.

The Rhetorical Situation of Letter from Birmingham Jail 

As the Civil Rights movement of the 1950’s and 1960’s unfolded, Martin Luther King Jr. had, perhaps, the most encompassing and personal rhetorical situation to face in American history. In Letter From Birmingham Jail, Martin Luther King responds to the subjectivity of law and the issue he paramounts by using precise and impactful rhetoric from inside of his jail cell. While this fight had been raging for nearly 10 years, the release in 1963 was shortly followed  by the Civil Rights Act in 1964.              

 

Martin Luther leading peaceful Birmingham protest, AP News

Lloyd Bitzer describes rhetorical situation as, “a complex of persons, events, objects, and relations presenting an actual or potential exigence which can be  completely or partially removed if discourse, introduced into the situation, can so constrain human decision or action to bring about the significant modification of the exigence” (6). In sum, all rhetoric has an external situation in which it is responding to. Analysing a rhetorical situation clarifies why a text was created, the purpose in which it was written, and why the author made specific choices while writing it. There are three main considerations to make while analysing a rhetorical situation: the constraints, the exigence, and the audience. Constraints bring light to the obstacles this rhetoric may face, whether it be social, political, economical, etc. and may encompass the audience, as seen while analysing Letter From Birmingham Jail. The audience of a rhetorical piece will shape the rhetoric the author uses in order to appeal, brazen, or educate whoever is exposed. Lastly, the exigence of a rhetorical piece is the external issue, situation, or event in which the rhetoric is responding to. All of these factors influence each other to shape rhetoric, which Bitzer describes as, “pragmatic; it comes into existence for the sake of something beyond itself” (3), with Martin Luther King’s Letter From Birmingham Jail being a shining example. 

In Letter From Birmingham Jail, the exigence is the continued condemnation, segregation, and prejudice afflicted against African Americans since the emancipation of the slaves in 1863. However, the racial divide was legislated in 1877 with the implementation of Jim Crow laws, which lasted until 1950. While the Civil Rights movement superseded the dismantling of Jim Crow, the social ideologies and lackadaisical legislature behind anti-black prejudice continued to rack the country far into the 1960’s. King was the figurehead of the Civil Rights movement, infamous for his “I Have a Dream” speech and substantially impactful rhetoric promoting social and political change, peaceful indignation, and calls to awareness. Martin Luther found himself arrested on the twelfth of April 1963 after leading a peaceful protest throughout Birmingham, Alabama “after he defied a state court’s injunction and led a march of black protesters without a permit, urging an Easter boycott of white-owned stores” (Jr., Martin Luther King). The eight clergymen in Birmingham released a public statement of caution regarding the protesters actions as “unwise and untimely” (King 1), to which Martin’s letter is a direct response. This protest, his subsequent arrest, and the clergymen’s public statement ostensibly make up the rhetorical exigence, but it truly stems from a much larger and dangerous situation at hand: the overwhelming state of anti-black prejudice spread socially, systematically, and legislatively in America since the country’s implementation of slavery in Jamestown, 1619. This exigence is rhetorical because it can be improved if enough people are socially cognizant, whether that be in legislature or the streets of Birmingham, through creation and enforcement of equitable laws and social attitudes. These circumstances lead us to our next rhetorical focus: audience. Who was he truly writing for?

The audience of Letter From Birmingham Jail was initially the eight clergymen of Birmingham, all white and in positions of religious leadership. However, in the months that followed, King’s powerful words were distributed to the public through civil right’s committees, the press, and was even read in testimony before Congress (‘Letter from Birmingham Jail’), taking the country by storm. While his letter was only addressed to the clergymen, it is safe to assume that King had intent on the public eventually reading his letter, considering his position within the Civil Rights movement, use of persuasive rhetorical language, and hard-hitting debates on the justification of law. With this addressed, his audience was truly the population of the United States, especially Birmingham, with a focus on those who withheld and complied with the oppression of African American citizens, even if not intentionally. This audience is rhetorical as the social and political ideologies of the American people fuel democracy and are able to change the system around them through collective effort. His writing is respectful and educated, if not naturally, to invalidate the use of his race against him by the largely prejudiced audience. It’s important to note that his initial readers/supporters greatly impacted the scope of his audience, spreading the letter through handouts, flyers, and press, in the hopes that others would be impacted for the better by the weight of the exigence at hand. His audience ranged between those who his message empowered, a radical positive force, and those who disagreed, made up of southern states, extremist groups, and the majority of American citizens stuck in their racial prejudices. Despite his support, Martin Luther’s audience is one of the largest constraints in his rhetorical situation. 

The constraints surrounding Martin Luther King’s rhetorical situation include the audience, the rhetorical exigence of the situation he is responding to, Dr. King himself, and the medium, all of which are deeply connected. Firstly, and most daunting, is the constraint of the letter’s audience. Initially, the eight Birmingham clergymen are the audience and while they were not overtly racist, King uses rhetoric meant to have them understand his urgency. As mentioned before, the social and political ideologies in America surrounding racial equity at this time, specifically in Birmingham, were extremely poor. While his supporters nation-wide were avid, determined, and hopeful, they were challenged by the opposing, vastly white population, comfortable in their segregated establishments and racist ideologies who would certainly weaponize his viewpoints. Not only was this a social division, but those who opposed King were reinforced by the respective legislature that sought to burden him. Despite his opposition, however, the letter is truly addressed to those who were not against King, but did not understand the urgency of his movement. The letter goes on to explain his choice to act directly and nonviolently, stating, “For years now I have heard the word ‘wait.’ It rings in the ear of every Negro with a piercing familiarity. This ‘wait’ has almost always meant ‘never’ (King 2). King chose to write this for a reason; to resonate with those who were not his enemies but who held back the movement through compliance. It was important for King to address this audience as their support would ultimately make the largest difference in the movement. The biases of the audience go hand in hand with the rhetorical exigence of this letter, another large constraint in the effectiveness of his message. The continuous mistreatment of African Americans for over a century was, at last, deeply questioned and challenged nationwide with the growing popularity of the Civil Rights movement, and the topic of equality for all had divided the country. All of this accumulates into an unwavering social constraint placed on Martin Luther King’s rhetorical text. To minimize the possibility of being deemed invalid due to his race, he must choose what he states and how he states it very precisely which correlates to the constraints Martin Luther himself has on his rhetorical situation. 

As a black man and pacifist-forward figurehead of the Civil Rights movement, the way Martin Luther is perceived is mostly dictated by preconceived biases and is rampant, widespread, and polarized. 

                Martin Luther in Birmingham Jail, The Atlantic

Furthermore, exterior events regarding the movement could ultimately reflect on his influence and polarize the audience further. Greater importance is placed on his tone, choice of words, choice of argument, and credibility, for better or for worse, and he must carefully make rhetorical decisions, not only because of his race. At this time, he is representative of the Black American population and the Civil Rights Movement as a whole– he is Martin Luther King Jr., and while this is a powerful position to occupy, the constraints imposed are just as dominant. Ultimately, he effectively tackles societal constraints, whether it be audience bias, historical racism, or how he is viewed by using the power of his rhetoric to his advantage. King spins the constraining pressure to properly represent the movement on its head, using his rhetoric to uplift the underprivileged and leave no room in his language for criticism, proven by the continuous adoption of his messages by the public. 

Lastly, King is constrained by his medium. A letter, as a medium, is constraining as there is one definitive original copy, it is addressed to a small specific group, and since it cannot be directly broadcasted widely, opposed to television or radio, it must be printed or passed along analogically. Whether this be by newspaper, flyers, or restated by another in speech, the spread of information is slower and potentially more controllable. The letter was written April third, 1963, it was published for the public in June of the same year, a slower spread than a nationwide address on television or radio. Additionally, personable elements such as tone, inflection, and overall vindication behind the letter are left to be determined by the rhetorical language. There may have been advantages to broadcasting this message similarly to his “I Have a Dream” speech, which touched America deeply, due potentially to the accessible, instantaneous, and widespread coverage in American media. He was able to further interact with the audience; they were able to hear his voice, listen to the intended tone behind his words, see his face, and study his demeanor in the face of adversary. However, this constraint did not ultimately halt the spread of King’s message nation-wide, as it became a persuasive landmark of the civil rights movement, likely due to both his impactful position and persuasive use of rhetoric. 

To truly understand the effectiveness of this letter, one must rhetorically analyse the contents. Martin Luther utilizes powerful rhetoric to define his exigence. He begins strongly by explaining why he is in Birmingham in the first place, stating, “So I am here…because we were invited here. I am here because I have basic organizational ties here” (King 1), after describing his involvement in the Southern Christian Leadership Conference as president. He goes on to add; “I am in Birmingham because injustice is here” (King 1). At the time, Birmingham was one of the harshest places to live in America for African Americans; white supremacy groups would set off bombs to instill fear in the black community and withhold racial integration, and peaceful protests and sit-ins were met with unjustifiable police violence, in addition to the suffocating social qualms surrounding the black community (Eskew). Consequently, Birmingham became the core of the Civil Rights movement, pumping the life-blood of social change into the rest of the country. Being nearly symbolic, King being held prisoner in Birmingham, the most polar racial arena of the United States, made his rhetoric more effective. It elucidated the exigence behind his letter as his presented rationale behind his arrest only made unjust laws appear more asinine and questionable by relation. Martin Luther King then goes on to make an analogy to the Bible, portraying Apostle Paul’s proliferation of the gospel of Jesus Christ in parallel to his own efforts, stating, “I too am compelled to carry the gospel of freedom beyond my particular hometown” (1). These encompass his exigence, at its most simple and precise, and validify the importance behind transforming the country in a positive way. 

The rhetorical choices referenced above are riddled with pathos, also known as language utilized to persuade the audience emotionally. Not only does he use pathos to humanize himself, but he also uses it to humanize his immediate audience, the eight clergymen. He opens with an explanation to his response, stating, “Seldom, if ever, do I pause to answer criticism of my work and ideas…But since I feel that you are men of genuine good will and your criticisms are sincerely set forth, I would like to answer your statement in what I hope will be patient and reasonable terms”(King 1). By addressing his respect for the clergymen, feigned or not, he is acknowledging the effectiveness of respect to those in power, whether they may or may not deserve it. King’s decision to compare his efforts to those of biblical figures with shared intent was a deliberate attempt to find common ground with his initial readers, the eight religious Birmingham clergymen, through the faith of a shared religion. His mention of involvement and leadership within a Christian civil rights organization, strength of religious analogy, and general politeness are effective rhetorical choices used to shape how he is perceived despite his critical response, racial setbacks, and arrest: a relatable man of faith, rationale, and initiative. 

Martin Luther King’s Letter From Birmingham Jail is undeniably effective at responding to the rhetorical situation at hand. While there were consistent and impactful efforts made by various groups for equality throughout the civil rights era, the proximity between the public release of the letter, found nation-wide by late 1963, and the passing of the Civil Rights Act in early July 1964 shows the direct impact the letter had on social attitudes following its publicization. The law was written in 1962, but the powerful response pushed the courts to finalize their decision. This period of quiet speculation over the law illuminates the national divide in opinion over the matter, one which King helped persuade positively. To summarize, Martin Luther King’s rhetoric is effective and ultimately changed the course of the Civil Rights movement for the better.                 

            

 

Works Cited

Bitzer, Lloyd F. “The Rhetorical Situation.” Philosophy & Rhetoric, vol. 1, no. 1, Penn State University Press, 1968, pp. 1–14, http://www.jstor.org/stable/40236733.

Glenn Eskew, “Bombingham: Black Protest in Postwar Birmingham, Alabama”, 1997

Jr., Martin Luther King. “Martin Luther King Jr.’s ‘Letter from Birmingham Jail’.” The Atlantic, Atlantic Media Company, 29 Jan. 2021, https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2018/02/letter-from-a-birmingham-jail/552461/. 

“‘Letter from Birmingham Jail.’” The Martin Luther King, Jr., Research and Education Institute, 29 May 2019, https://kinginstitute.stanford.edu/encyclopedia/letter-birmingham-jail.