Code Meshing With Respect

by Cami Greene

In 2009, Stanley Fish released a three-part essay piece entitled “What Should Colleges Teach?” The third part of the series, which can be considered the most important piece, details how colleges and schools should teach writing. Fish argues that Standard English should be taught as the primary dialect used for academic purposes but acknowledges that groups of people have prior dialects they use to speak. He claims that solely teaching Standard English will allow those with other dialects to not be prejudiced against or taken less seriously compared to someone who uses Standard English (2). Following this essay, Professor Vershawn Ashanti Young published an essay reacting to Fish. Young mainly disagrees with Fish and claims that Fish is indirectly supporting language discrimination because “he appeal to its acceptable form-standard language ideology” (111). Furthermore, Young presents the idea of code meshing, which is when different dialects are blended together in conversation, leading to language diversity (114). This disagreement of sorts paves the way for scholars to talk about whether different dialects, such as AAVE, can be accepted into academic usage. I believe that we should use code meshing to some extent, but primarily accept AAVE and other dialects as grammatically correct and academically appropriate.

Following the release of Young’s essay, people began to discuss code meshing and how it could be incorporated into society. Ghanashyam Sharma wrote about Young among others about how Standard English is the “assumed” language and the people who are going against that narrative. Suresh Canagarajah is another writing who promotes code meshing. Canagarajah’s idea is to have teachers allow students to create their own forms of English with previously known dialects, while Young promotes the idea of teaching multiple dialects, so every child is multidialectal (Sharma 253). I agree with both writers and their opinions because I think students should be allowed to speak their own dialects without having a singular standard of English. However, I think Fish has a valid point when he mentioned that it may not be the best idea to implement a multidialectal education in schools because of previous prejudices of AAVE and Black dialects (Fish 2). If we were to teach multiple dialects at once, those who are white may appropriate black language or take it too far, such as using slurs like the N-word. Although I believe Fish has a valid point, I think overall I agree with Young and Canagarajah more.

Another voice in this discussion is John McWhorter, another author who writes about racism and the advocacy for black voices. In an article on his website titled,” ARE WHITE PEOPLE USING BLACK ENGLISH WORDS BEING LIKE ELVIS STEALING ROCK AND ROLL?” McWhorter summarizes a skit from Saturday Night Live in which multiracial people were using AAVE and Black dialects. Within the segment, the actors were playing teens communicating in AAVE. Although they were not making fun of the language, there was great backlash because people assumed a white person wrote the skit, but in reality, Michael Che (who is Black), wrote the skit (27). Without knowing who write the skit, people thought the non-Black actors were appropriating Black culture. McWhorter indirectly argues in favor of Young’s code meshing because we have a history of being interconnected, such as music. Using music as an example, artists such as the Rolling Stones or Eminem would not have the popularity they do without Black culture. He answers the title of his article by explaining that white people are using Black language to show how comfortable they are becoming with Black people rather than stealing their culture, but there are also still words white people don’t use from Black dialects (26). In the classroom, this way of thinking could be seen through code meshing and having blended languages. Students would have interconnected dialects without appropriating Black languages.

This way of thinking led me to believe that code meshing with respect will help the future of language in academia. If students use a version of code meshing, but acknowledging the roots of Black dialects, students can grow up being more diverse with their language and highlighting the equality of language. Originally, I thought it would be best to not code mesh because of appropriation and the worry that white people would not use Black language correctly, but McWhorter explained that if we were to try to keep languages separate, it would not work out due to how immersed language is in society and how quickly people pick up phrases. On top of that, McWhorter does not believe in a true form of “Black English” because it could be seen as a black person speaking in a Southern accent, which is not wrong in itself, but can be seen as an indicator of a lack of intelligence, especially using outdated stereotypes (23-24). This idea supports Young’s idea of multidialectal speaking because of how engrained the use of combined dialects already is, proving that it would be more difficult to try and separate the languages instead of embracing the diversity.

One way code meshing with respect could be enforced in a classroom is to create a guide deciding how non-Black students should or should not code mesh to an extent. This is only a suggestion but can lead those who are confused about code meshing in the right path. An example of this is allowing AAVE and room for discussion but not allowing slurs or derogatory statements. When deciding what is or is not respectful, nobody in particular can choose for all, but I recommend listening to people of color in the community and seeing what they have to say, but also realizing that this topic means something different to everyone and not everyone will have the same response.

However, the larger issue at hand is that Black dialects are not accepted as academically or grammatically correct, leading to racism against Black people and the continuous stereotypes that they are not as educated as white people. If the academic community accepted Black dialects, there could be more diversity in the way people write and speak in the classroom. This could also lead to some of the negative stereotypes not being as popular as they currently are because Black writers would be gaining more recognition for their work and ideas.

In conclusion, writers have been arguing about how Black language can be incorporated into the academic community for years. Both Fish and Young want to have Black dialects acknowledged, but Fish wants Standard English to remain the appropriate dialect used for academic purposes, while Young wants to combine dialects in the classroom to create a diverse experience. Other authors have sided with Young, such as Canagarajah or McWhorter, but still think Fish has valid points. I primarily agree with Young and McWhorter, but I think that we should code mesh to a respectable extent and teach the histories of Black dialects so they can be widely accepted in society.

 

 

Works Cited

 

Fish, Stanley. “‘What Should Colleges Teach?’ Part 3.” New York Times, 7 Sept. 2009.

McWhorter, John. “ARE WHITE PEOPLE USING BLACK ENGLISH WORDS BEING LIKE ELVIS STEALING ROCK AND ROLL?” It Bears Mentioning, 29 May 2021, johnmcwhorter.substack.com/p/are-white-people-using-black-english?r=3vwvr&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&utm_source=twitter.

Sharma, Ghanashyam. “Rethinking Language and Writing in Composition.” JSTOR, 2009, www.jstor.org/stable/20866895.

Young, Vershawn Ashanti. “Should Writers Use They Own English.” Iowa Journal of Cultural Studies, vol. 12, no. 1, 2010, pp. 110–18. JSTOR, ir.uiowa.edu/ijc.

Cami Greene- Rhetorical Situation Analysis

Rhetorical Situation Analysis

During the 2018 Midterm elections, one of the biggest elections occurring was the race for Governor of Florida. The two main opponents for the race were Democrat Andrew Gillum and Republican Ron DeSantis. According to Politico’s documentation, DeSantis ended up winning the election by 32,463 votes (Florida Governor Election Results). While campaigning, DeSantis released a campaign video with his wife Casey. In the video, DeSantis is seen teaching his two young children about Donald Trump. The video starts out by Casey explaining how many assume her husband is “all Trump,” but then says he is more than that. Then, the video pans to DeSantis building a pretend border wall with his daughter. After that, DeSantis can be seen reading a book about Trump while reciting Trump’s catchphrase, “You’re Fired!” The next clip is of DeSantis teaching his daughter how to say, “Make America Great Again.” The final clip of DeSantis with his children is of DeSantis leaning over his son’s crib and saying, “Bigly.” This video was meant to show DeSantis’ loyalty to the president at the time. One can claim that the campaign ad was effective because DeSantis was elected governor.

To prove whether the campaign was effective or not, we first need to define a rhetorical situation. Lloyd Bitzer defines a rhetorical situation as “a complex persons, events, objects, and relations presenting an actual or potential exigence which can be completely or partially removed with discourse, introduced into the situation, can so constrain human decision or action as to bring about significant modification of the exigence” (6). Examples of these can include commercials, political advertisements, and speeches. A rhetorical situation is also made up of three components: an exigence, an audience, and constraints. An exigence is an obstacle or something waiting to be done, while an audience is who sees the message or is persuaded by it, and a constraint is a part of the situation that can influence the exigence (Bitzer 6-8).

The exigence for the campaign advertisement is that DeSantis wanting to prove his loyalty for Trump during the 2018 midterm election. This approval can be defined as the exigence because DeSantis wanted Trump to endorse him in order for Floridians to vote for DeSantis during the 2018 midterm elections. The primary audience for the video would be Floridians deciding who to vote for governor. According to the Florida Division of Elections, sixty-three percent of Floridians voted in the 2018 midterms, which is more compared to the fifty-one percent who voted during the 2014 midterms. However, in both the 2016 and 2020 presidential elections, voter turnout was seventy-five percent and seventy-seven percent respectively (Voter Turnout). One of the reasons voter turnout was higher than normal in 2018 was the fact that a new governor was being elected. The incumbent, Rick Scott, was ending his term for governor. Another cause of higher turnout could be the youth in Florida entering the polls. It is noted that the younger generations are becoming more politically active, leading them to want to make a direct impact on their state politics (Poll).

For the campaign video, there are several constraints. Some of these include the video being posted on social media, the use of pathos in the video itself, reactions from both GOP members and party outsiders, and the power President Trump had on DeSantis. The use of social media and technology plays an ever-increasing role in political elections. This is because social media allows people from across the globe to easily access anything posted online. This ad was posted on YouTube, a video sharing app and website created in 2005. The purpose of the platform is to allow content creators to post videos that can be connected to subscribers across the world. Having the ad be posted onto YouTube, rather than Facebook allows younger generations to have access to candidates. The use of social media can constrain the effectiveness of the ad if those with differing political opinions from DeSantis view the video. Furthermore, social media and YouTube allows the creator of the video to use more creative techniques when campaigning, which might not be able to be used in a more formal setting, such as a commercial on TV. Social media would also allow users to critique DeSantis’ video clearly. As mentioned previously, youth voter turnout can significantly change voting results. Moreover, people of all ages use YouTube and social media, even though it is intended for younger audiences.

In the video, DeSantis puts a prime focus on his two young children. This can appeal to the audience because of pathos, which is when emotions are used to persuade an audience. Children can easily make the audience feel something, for everyone loves children and older voters with children or grandchildren can feel and see the love DeSantis shows his children. This can persuade them into voting for DeSantis rather than another candidate.

Following the release of the campaign ad, like all political content, there were mixed reviews. According to Rolling Stone Magazine, the video was “the most bizarre 2018 campaign ad” (Bort). This opinion is shared with those who oppose Trump or DeSantis’ views. An example of this includes the comments made on the video where viewers argued that they thought the video was a skit from Saturday Night Live instead of an actual campaign video (Ron DeSantis Has Released). On the other hand, sources such as the Tampa Bay Times touted the video as “lighthearted” and completely different from his previous ads (Mahoney). The variation in reactions can show how polarized the audience was, which makes sense, considering the slimmer margin of the 2018 Florida gubernational race.

The most important constraint of the campaign ad was Donald Trump and his sphere of influence. At the time, the GOP had the Senate majority, while the Democrats had the House majority. The Supreme Court also had a conservative majority following the swearing in of Brett Kavanaugh in 2018. The GOP majority is important to consider when discussing the ad because this widespread conservative ruling led there to be more GOP candidates wanting to enter office in positions such as Congressmen or Governor. This increase led to Trump giving endorsements to candidates who were public supporters of Trump. These endorsements led more Trump-backed GOP members to be elected. Although public endorsements are common, Trump’s endorsements were important. This is because Trump did not follow traditional Republican narratives and created his own form of the GOP. The modern GOP primarily focuses on radicalism and eliminating the Democratic left from power, a stark difference from how previous Republicans have acted with their opponents.

In Florida specifically, the GOP has managed to gain more power during and post-Trump Era. This has led to candidates such as DeSantis and Congressmen Matt Gaetz to spread what can be quoted as “Trumpism” or the former president’s beliefs in general. During the 2016 election, Florida’s love for Trump can be seen with Trump winning the state by 119,770 votes (Florida Election Results). Trump’s endorsement for DeSantis is mentioned in the ad, but can be considered a constraint because without Trump, DeSantis would most likely not be as spoken out about his opinions without having a prominent figure support him. With DeSantis essentially proving his loyalty for Trump in the ad, it shows the audience that DeSantis will continue to support Trump far into the future, leading Trump supporters in Florida wanting to vote for DeSantis.

To conclude, DeSantis’ 2018 campaign ad can be seen as effective through his use of upholding GOP core values and supporting former president Trump. The use of social media also plays a pivotal point in DeSantis’ success because it allowed people across the world to view DeSantis as a family-oriented person, while also describing his loyalty to Trump. Having the precedent of a Republican governor aided DeSantis because he was following the pattern, instead of disrupting it. Although DeSantis has been highly criticized for his actions as governor, his campaign ad remains effective.