by Adriana Uldrick
Louisa May Alcott’s writing feels like home to me. This is fitting since most of her writing concerns the home, but the impact her words have on me goes beyond this. Her poem “A Song from the Suds” is a fantastic representation of the type of work she produces that gives me the warm fuzzies.
Queen of my tub, I merrily sing,
While the white foam raises high,
And sturdily wash, and rinse, and wring,
And fasten the clothes to dry;
Then out in the free fresh air they swing,
Under the sunny sky.
The simple, straightforward language of this poem is the first reason why I love it so much. Because it is so easy to understand, it is easy for me to internalize and digest it. Reading this poem is like eating oatmeal in the way that it feels wholesome, comforting, and nourishing.
I wish we could wash from our hearts and our souls
The stains of the week away,
And let water and air by their magic make
Ourselves as pure as they;
Then on the earth there would be indeed
A glorious washing day!
Again, Alcott wastes no time in letting the reader know what’s going on or why she’s writing. This innocent desire to wash our hearts and souls just as we wash our laundry is undeniably adorable. Beyond this, Alcott simplifies and gives “magic” to the otherwise abstract and daunting task of purifying oneself. Though much of Alcott’s work has obviously religious overtones, I interpret the purification of this poem as independent from ideals of religious purification. Because the purification is just of “the week’s stains” (which I read as small things that stressed, hurt, or otherwise negatively affected you on a small scale) instead of the unbearable weight of sin for example, the hope that Alcott offers feels more realistic and achievable.
If achievable is not the right word to describe this hope, surely universal is. I appreciate the delicate balance between directness and ambiguity that Alcott creates with her choices of language. She is direct because of the simple language and lack of beating around the bush that I mentioned earlier, but ambiguous by not being specific about the “stains” are or what “pure” means.
In this stanza I also love what is almost a call to action, an encouragement for everyone to participate in this self-purification. It provides an altruistic perspective to bettering oneself and gives a bigger meaning to the little tasks that seem menial. For this day to be considered glorious again could hint at religion, but I think that it means glorious in the sense that it is overwhelmingly delightful…which is a remarkable feeling to encounter while doing the laundry.
Along the path of a useful life
Will heart’s-ease ever bloom;
The busy mind has no time to think
Of sorrow, or care, or gloom;
And anxious thoughts may be swept away
As we busily wield a broom.
What a perfect picture Alcott paints!! A life paved productivity and meaning lined by blooming flowers of “heart’s-ease” is all I could ever ask for.
I do love the first half of this poem, but the second half is particularly special to me…I feel like these last two stanzas are the most impactful. In fact, I think the poem could be summarized by the single line “The busy mind has no time to think”. The clever sweeping away of anxious thoughts by a broom is especially compelling to me because of my own struggles with anxiety, which I would take great pleasure in seeing turn into dust so I could sweep it up. Alcott makes the intangible tangible, which makes coping with any “stains” easier.
I am glad a task to me is given
To labor at day by day;
For it brings me health, and strength, and hope,
And I cheerfully learn to say-
“Head, you may think; heart, you may feel;
But hand, you shall work always!”
This stanza is relevant to what I mentioned earlier about how Alcott gives significance and appreciation to the otherwise menial and dull. This love for the things that many people, myself included, dread in our daily lives truly is magical and is so worthwhile.
Due in part to the simple language that I keep doting on, this poem is extraordinarily memorable. The tagline that Alcott provides at the end adds to the poem’s memorability, giving me a mantra to repeat to myself when my chores seem overwhelming or my work loses its appeal. Actually, this sentiment of Alcott has been with me since I first read Little Women eight years ago and because of the affinity I have for the novel (especially the opening chapter), the meaning of this poem is reinforced by nostalgia.
Even for readers who do not have this nostalgic connection though, I believe that the feeling the poem invokes is inevitable. Alcott tactfully relies on familiar concepts and such comfy, uplifting language that you can’t help but smile at.
I really like the way that you address Alcott’s ambiguity particularly when addressing the tones of purity in the poem. I believe that many people, at least from my experience, want to return to a “cleaner” version of themselves, and “wash away” the stresses and anxiety that life builds onto us, much like barnacles on a ship’s underbelly. But I agree that it is necessary that this state of “purity” should be seen as starkly separate from traditional social standards. Because it truly would be delightful to sweep away the dust on our hearts and live a freer life!
I thoroughly enjoyed your post and the way you approach this poem. Through your language, it is abundantly clear that you resonate with this poem a lot and truly do have a soft spot for it. The descriptors you used are colloquial and exude familiarity, which I really enjoyed. I found your analysis to be very logical yet personable. The connections you make to your personal life, like the image of the broom and your struggles with anxiety, are admirable and enjoyable to read about. You balance your love and respect for the poem’s craft very well!
Hey Adriana! I had never heard of this poem before so it was exciting for me to read it along with your interpretation of it. My favorite part of your response was the part where you were elaborating about purification and the desire to cleanse ourselves spiritually. I thought your response was well organized as you went into detail about the idea of purification throughout the first part of the poem then went onto how the second part of the poem discussed how important it is for people to appreciate life.
I completely agree, there are most days where all I want is to start completely fresh without any of my commitments or life stressors and see what that would make me. I loved your interpretation of Alcott’s poem, and find that I resonate with this understanding as well. While most days I would like to start fresh, I agree that this poem allows me to dream of a pure life, while also appreciating the mundane that keeps me tethered to my current life.