Loves Challange – Lexie Milwood

Lexie Milwood

 

Loves Challange

Heroes, so strong and courageous

Powerful and fearless

They are what others strive to be

They are admired by all but understood by none

The hero yearns to be loved

But battle takes him far from home

Whilst he’s gone, he finds a beauty

He yearns to bring her home

But the ocean dares not let her pass, 

And let the hero succeed

Taking her victims one by one

She shall not let him win

Steadfast on the path, his eyes set on home

He holds her tightly to his chest

His missing piece, his other half

He dared not let her go

He faces on till daybreak comes

Hoping to find love in someone new 

Explanation: The poem struck my immediate attention in the museum because it had so much emotion in it. I saw the man grasping onto the woman, almost as if yearning for her, fearing to let go. He did not seem to care about the other men falling overboard, which is why I was led to believe they were in love. The mean looks like how I would imagine a soldier/hero from around ancient Greece/Roman times. I wanted ot make it a love story about the hero and the woman because the path to love is never easy, and I felt as though the ocean symbolized the challenges and how, from the start, there will always be people or things against you. I didn’t want to rhyme because I wanted it to seem more like a story and more imaginable. I felt as though the rhyme would take away the imagery and make the reader focus more on the words. I didn’t want there to be a pattern to focus on, but rather the words and how I interpreted the artwork.

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